Monday, April 2, 2012

A Relenting Earth..


April 3, 2012

Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..


Prompt: Harbour
 
A Relenting Earth
 
Earth hides behind clouds;
does not harbour any grudge
golden Sun rises

Golden Sun rises;
quietly peeps through the dark clouds,
a relenting Earth...

A relenting Earth;
ah, nature never harbours
any ill feelings...


RS:)

16 comments:

  1. wow... 3 haiku almost covered the true beauty and character of the entire nature.. loved it.. :)

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  2. an excellent set of Haiku...beautiful description of the true colors of nature... :)

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  3. I enjoyed this post very much. One of the lines I especially like is "a relenting Earth"
    and she relents particularly to us, does she not?

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  4. any ill feelings???? beautiful set of Haiku Rameshji.. :-)

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  5. she doesn't, she is generous ~

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  6. Excellent ~ very inspiring and well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. Beautifully crafted haiku trio Ramesh.

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  8. we should all do our part to save mother earth to prevent calamities...excellent haiku and a reminder for all of us to take care of mother earth...thanks for sharing!

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  9. good 1 sir ... i m learning a lot from u :) thanku :)

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  10. Beautiful set....Yes! nature doesn't harbors any ill feelings...Awesome point :)

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  11. It sometimes seems that nature harbours ill-feelings towards us: tsunami, hurricanes, drought and disease.
    But your haiku chain is beautiful anyway.
    V

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  12. Nice set of haiku! But about ill feelings of nature, I agree with Vivinfrance.

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  13. Beautifully crafted haiku on "a relenting earth"

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  14. I love this...
    thank you...
    Peace
    Siggi of Downeast Maine

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  15. Beautifully expressed, Ramesh!!
    Thank you for sharing!!!

    This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.

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