Saturday, April 21, 2012

I Write A Still Haiku




April 22, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge

 
Prompt : Still
 
  
She sits
with  mind still;
clouds burst

***

I write
a still haiku;
feel it..



RS:)
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16 comments:

  1. Jaideep RaoApril 21, 2012 at 11:54 AM

    Excellent first haiku sir, nice!

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  2. PranitaApril 21, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    First one... too good Ramesh ji...! Felt like you wrote it on me!

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  3. Mohini PuranikApril 21, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    3-5-3 is amazing one to express..loved both.

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  4. debuApril 21, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    amazing second one ..

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  5. zongrikApril 21, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    a still haiku...remains forever in time

    three still haiku and-senryu

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  6. Sridevi Nayak KApril 21, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    With very little words, you have expressed so much thing with just one word. :) I Liked it.

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  7. carol l mckennaApril 21, 2012 at 2:31 PM

    Wonderful haiku ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. GraceApril 21, 2012 at 2:35 PM

    I like the first one...still, I like the second one ~

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  9. Judith WesterfieldApril 21, 2012 at 10:01 PM

    I love the "still haiku" image.

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  10. vivinfranceApril 21, 2012 at 11:22 PM

    Both excellent. Clouds are bursting here as I write!

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  11. CYNOSUREApril 22, 2012 at 1:52 AM

    1st one was lovely...beautifully written... :)

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  12. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 22, 2012 at 2:21 AM

    Both are lovely!

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  13. SimranApril 22, 2012 at 7:06 AM

    Wonderful take, Ramesh ji :)

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  14. ChevrefeuilleApril 22, 2012 at 11:43 AM

    Love these STILL haiku Ramesh.

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  15. AnonymousApril 22, 2012 at 1:09 PM

    Nice use of 3-5-3! :)
    Day 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows

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  16. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 22, 2012 at 4:30 PM

    What a startling juxtaposition: still mind/clouds burst.

    How can this be?

    Anything is possible in poetry!

    “Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”

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