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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Excellent first haiku sir, nice!
First one... too good Ramesh ji...! Felt like you wrote it on me!
3-5-3 is amazing one to express..loved both.
amazing second one ..
a still haiku...remains forever in timethree still haiku and-senryu
With very little words, you have expressed so much thing with just one word. :) I Liked it.
Wonderful haiku ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
I like the first one...still, I like the second one ~
I love the "still haiku" image.
Both excellent. Clouds are bursting here as I write!
1st one was lovely...beautifully written... :)
Both are lovely!
Wonderful take, Ramesh ji :)
Love these STILL haiku Ramesh.
Nice use of 3-5-3! :)Day 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows
What a startling juxtaposition: still mind/clouds burst.How can this be?Anything is possible in poetry!“Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”