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haiku;don't hold temptation,comment.I loved this...Coz i wonder why people are so reluctant to comment!!!!Nice one....
"tempted" to comment:), good piece of poetry again sir!
Kudos to this thought! Really.. Digging into the past of someone close to you is extremely tempting.. Resisting takes a whole lot of efforts and strength to hold yourslf back!
both of them are nicely crafted sir
She refuses to dig past, yes true example of temptation, it really happens so..
I agree that its tempting to dig someone pasts...but it most of the times hurts to those whose past is being dug...great thought... :)
very nicely penned :)
Very nice first haiku: there is more than one way to read it.
Wow... loved the way ur 2nd haiku tempts to comment .. enjoyed both:-) ...n y surrender for such temptations when there are better temptations! ...
Its smart tat she refuses!..PS: published before I could complete ...well gave on my temptation to fully comment:-) ..enjoyed..thank u
Kudos to this thought! Really.. Digging into the past of someone close to you is extremely tempting.. Resisting takes a whole lot of efforts and strength to hold yourslf back!Rosy lips of temptation - A Haiku
I never hold back to comment..he..he... I like your take on this temptation ~
I liked both of your haiku today. The second temptation I can handle - the first would be more difficult :-)
well crafted haiku ~ ^_^
Good for her. Nice one.
Because she does notwant to know the truth it willspoil the temptation:)
Love the ambiguity of "dig" in the last line.Richard
Richard would notice ambiguity!Sniffing Temptation
beautiful and so realistic haiku!..Temptation
Trying to tempt her imagination too!! :)Happy weekend, Ramesh! Day 27 ~~ My Diet's Expiration