Wednesday, April 4, 2012

The Dancing Waves Retreat..

April 5, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..


Prompt: Waves

The Dancing Waves Retreat..


Ah, the setting Sun
sends greetings with dancing waves;
leaving my eyes wet..

Leaving my eyes wet
the dancing waves retreat;
I write in the sand

I write in the sand
as waves of thoughts hit my head;
fresh set of haiku

fresh set of haiku
lets waves settle for the night;
Ah, the setting Sun.. 

RS:)
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22 comments:

  1. CYNOSUREApril 4, 2012 at 12:06 PM

    Nice Haiku...brilliantly composed... :)

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  2. ElleceeApril 4, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    I can see the setting sun, the waves and your tears. Very nice haiku. Thank you.

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  3. debuApril 4, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    let waves settle for the night.....loved the gentleness of the flow...

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  4. AnonymousApril 4, 2012 at 12:09 PM

    Rameshji, awesome ji. :D :)

    truly sir, this is absolutely beautiful.. thank you so very much..


    the flow of the haiku kind of brought a pleasantness to my head and heart. thank you very much Rameshji. :)

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  5. PranitaApril 4, 2012 at 12:31 PM

    A Delightful set of poetic lines here... Loved it... You have a gr8 blog Ramesh ji.. :)
    Cheers!

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  6. SurbhiApril 4, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    beautifully expressed a complete day with waves :) Thumbs up :)

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  7. GraceApril 4, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    Very nice...I feel the dancing waves and fresh thoughts coming in ~

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  8. carol l mckennaApril 4, 2012 at 5:19 PM

    You are on a 'roll' with these excellent haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. ChevrefeuilleApril 5, 2012 at 12:53 AM

    You did it again Ramesh ... this cascading haiku is awesome. Love the read.

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  10. Mariya KolevaApril 5, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    ah, that setting sun ;-) Wonderful and soothing cascade!

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  11. rallentandaApril 5, 2012 at 3:01 AM

    I wonder if you are weeping because of the beauty of the natural world or the thought of a love!

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  12. Andy SewinaApril 5, 2012 at 4:18 AM

    I quite like the way you sandwich this between 'Ah, the setting sun'

    My Day Five for NaPoWriMo

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  13. Sanjana April 5, 2012 at 4:44 AM

    Genius!! :)

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  14. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 5, 2012 at 4:46 AM

    Your haiku is like the rhythmic sounds of those waves...Beautifully penned :)

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  15. AmityApril 5, 2012 at 5:48 AM

    A beautiful haiku-cum-loop poem Ramesh...:-)

    I love the dancing waves, sometimes I wish I could go with the tempo!

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  16. KarenApril 5, 2012 at 6:32 AM

    Great haiku. I often write in the sand when I am at the beach.

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  17. kaykualaApril 5, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    Great haiku, Ramesh! The dancing wave is poetry in motion!


    Hank

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  18. AnonymousApril 5, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    Beautifully and cleverly written.

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  19. PattiKenApril 5, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    I like the repetition in this. The words roll just like waves. Nice.

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  20. Gemma WisemanApril 6, 2012 at 4:37 PM

    A beautiful, painterly cycle of images!

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  21. Mr. WalkerApril 7, 2012 at 5:37 AM

    Like the way you've linked these haiku. And "waves of thoughts" - great image.

    Richard

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