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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
This is the first thought I got when I thought about 'white'...But I couldn't put it into words....You did it so naturally and beautifully...Awesome haiku!
That's always one of the biggest fear...very well framed... :)
ReplyDeleteWell said.. spotless white and tainted dots... :))
ReplyDeleteLike it!
I could truly relate to the second haiku, for who wants tainted dots?
ReplyDeleteVivid and honest in the picture of fear portrayed. Thanks for your comments on my blog.
ReplyDeleteBoth are beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteVery much the reality... Coming clean always takes some efforts.. but maintaining that is a real challenge!
ReplyDeletewonderful!!!
ReplyDeleteThe cynicism of the second haiku made me chuckle. :-D
ReplyDelete"my soul I weave now;", Can't get better than this :)
ReplyDeleteI like the second one best. Nice!
ReplyDeleteOh, my friend, the taint is inevitable! :)
ReplyDelete“Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”
What an amazing contrast...spotless white with tainted dots ~ well done ~
ReplyDeleteWonderful senryu. I like the progress of thought.
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This is the first thought I got when I thought about 'white'...But I couldn't put it into words....You did it so naturally and beautifully...Awesome haiku!
ReplyDeleteGreat ones Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteThis is thought-provoking. It could be a theme for a longer story.
ReplyDeleteReally nice and thoughtful!:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed :)
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