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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
That's always one of the biggest fear...very well framed... :)
Well said.. spotless white and tainted dots... :)) Like it!
I could truly relate to the second haiku, for who wants tainted dots?
Vivid and honest in the picture of fear portrayed. Thanks for your comments on my blog.
Both are beautifully written.
Very much the reality... Coming clean always takes some efforts.. but maintaining that is a real challenge!
The cynicism of the second haiku made me chuckle. :-D
"my soul I weave now;", Can't get better than this :)
I like the second one best. Nice!
Oh, my friend, the taint is inevitable! :)“Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”
What an amazing contrast...spotless white with tainted dots ~ well done ~
Wonderful senryu. I like the progress of thought.Richard
This is the first thought I got when I thought about 'white'...But I couldn't put it into words....You did it so naturally and beautifully...Awesome haiku!
Great ones Ramesh.
This is thought-provoking. It could be a theme for a longer story.
Really nice and thoughtful!:)
beautifully expressed :)