Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Spotless White..



April 18, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge


Prompt : White

Spotless White

Raiment of
my soul I weave now;
spotless white

Spotless white;
I fear attracting
tainted dots..


RS:)

18 comments:

  1. That's always one of the biggest fear...very well framed... :)

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  2. Well said.. spotless white and tainted dots... :))
    Like it!

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  3. I could truly relate to the second haiku, for who wants tainted dots?

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  4. Vivid and honest in the picture of fear portrayed. Thanks for your comments on my blog.

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  5. Very much the reality... Coming clean always takes some efforts.. but maintaining that is a real challenge!

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  6. The cynicism of the second haiku made me chuckle. :-D

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  7. "my soul I weave now;", Can't get better than this :)

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  8. I like the second one best. Nice!

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  9. What an amazing contrast...spotless white with tainted dots ~ well done ~

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  10. Wonderful senryu. I like the progress of thought.

    Richard

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  11. This is the first thought I got when I thought about 'white'...But I couldn't put it into words....You did it so naturally and beautifully...Awesome haiku!

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  12. This is thought-provoking. It could be a theme for a longer story.

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