Sunday, April 22, 2012

Mesmerising truth.

April 23, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge



Prompt: Mesmerise

Mesmerising truth
(3-5-3 and 5-7-5)

Ah, sunset
mesmerises me;
other side

other side;
mesmerised by
sunrise..

***

opposites exist
happily in one moment;
mesmerising truth

RS:)
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17 comments:

  1. Jaideep RaoApril 22, 2012 at 11:41 AM

    "truth mesmerises"- so truly said sir :)

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  2. Mohini PuranikApril 22, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    Mesmerizing truth.

    We say, truth is always bitter, but you said, Mesmerizing truth. Mesmerized.

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  3. LeoviApril 22, 2012 at 12:11 PM

    I really captivating sunsets.

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  4. PranitaApril 22, 2012 at 1:20 PM

    The last Haiku... Very thoughtful! Opposited do exist together indeed!

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  5. GraceApril 22, 2012 at 1:45 PM

    I like the idea of sunrise and sunset...all facets of one- truth ~

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    1. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 23, 2012 at 6:08 PM

      Yes, I was going to ask, Ramesh, if sunsets mesmerise you too.

      Mesmerize

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  6. SandyCarlsonApril 22, 2012 at 7:13 PM

    Mesmerizing all around!

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  7. vivinfranceApril 22, 2012 at 11:58 PM

    a lovely set.

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  8. AnonymousApril 23, 2012 at 1:54 AM

    I like the post. Really nice one. Thank you for sharing.


    ERP gujarat

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  9. Sri ValliApril 23, 2012 at 3:29 AM

    Very thoughtful haiku...Beautifully penned :)
    Sweet Escape

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  10. CYNOSUREApril 23, 2012 at 4:46 AM

    for all of them...WOW... :)

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  11. carol l mckennaApril 23, 2012 at 7:14 AM

    amazing haiku ~~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  12. SimranApril 23, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Beautiful ...
    A mesmerize meeting truth :)

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  13. PattiKenApril 23, 2012 at 9:35 AM

    Life and nature show us opposites coexisting every day. Nice one, this.

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  14. Sasha A. PalmerApril 23, 2012 at 10:41 AM

    I like how you brought sunset and sunrise together!

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  15. ElleceeApril 23, 2012 at 12:19 PM

    I like your line "opposites exist
    happily in one moment" Sometimes we don't realize how true this can be. I enjoyed your haiku today :-)

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  16. smiling soulApril 24, 2012 at 5:22 AM

    brilliant thought! :)

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