Sunday, April 22, 2012

Mesmerising truth.

April 23, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge



Prompt: Mesmerise

Mesmerising truth
(3-5-3 and 5-7-5)

Ah, sunset
mesmerises me;
other side

other side;
mesmerised by
sunrise..

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opposites exist
happily in one moment;
mesmerising truth

RS:)

17 comments:

  1. "truth mesmerises"- so truly said sir :)

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  2. Mesmerizing truth.

    We say, truth is always bitter, but you said, Mesmerizing truth. Mesmerized.

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  3. I really captivating sunsets.

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  4. The last Haiku... Very thoughtful! Opposited do exist together indeed!

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  5. I like the idea of sunrise and sunset...all facets of one- truth ~

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    1. Yes, I was going to ask, Ramesh, if sunsets mesmerise you too.

      Mesmerize

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  6. I like the post. Really nice one. Thank you for sharing.


    ERP gujarat

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  7. Beautiful ...
    A mesmerize meeting truth :)

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  8. Life and nature show us opposites coexisting every day. Nice one, this.

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  9. I like how you brought sunset and sunrise together!

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  10. I like your line "opposites exist
    happily in one moment" Sometimes we don't realize how true this can be. I enjoyed your haiku today :-)

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