Saturday, April 14, 2012

Last Breath..

April 15, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..


Prompt: Alive..


last breath;
ah, she was so
alive..



RS:)
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18 comments:

  1. PranitaApril 14, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    OMG! That's so beautiful... a short Haiku, but said it all.. So true... we hold on to our beloved ones till the last breath... til that moment, they're still so alive!

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  2. Diana TenevaApril 14, 2012 at 1:42 PM

    Wow! So much truth and wisdom in your haiku!

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  3. TigerbriteApril 14, 2012 at 2:26 PM

    This must mean something special to you. Your mother perhaps ?

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  4. SwetaApril 14, 2012 at 3:00 PM

    In few words you conveyed a lot of meaning ! This was just beautiful :-)

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  5. AnonymousApril 14, 2012 at 3:02 PM

    This creates a vivid picture of who she was and how she lived.

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  6. MyWordsWhisperApril 14, 2012 at 5:18 PM

    These words are so powerful. They show the transition from what was to what is.

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  7. PattiKenApril 14, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    This says so much iin so few words. Like a last sigh.

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  8. AnonymousApril 14, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    I love your brief haiku - the essence of the spirit of haiku to say so much in a nutshell.

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  9. Mohini PuranikApril 15, 2012 at 12:33 AM

    How can you express it Rameshji...incredible! life and death, between is last moment which is only alive

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  10. Sri ValliApril 15, 2012 at 12:53 AM

    Simple words with so much deep meaning.....Awesome!

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  11. kaykualaApril 15, 2012 at 8:27 AM

    Short and sweet and penetrating on the thoughts! Great write Ramesh!

    Hank

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  12. zongrikApril 15, 2012 at 8:58 AM

    nice and tight

    alive on subway senryu

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 15, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    Was...and now is...not...


    “More Dead Than Alive”

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  14. debuApril 15, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    I came back for this ...twice today...there is a power i feel of expression , in the eyes.. who see life like this ..

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  15. Ramesh SoodApril 15, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    To all my friends who visit me..I can only humbly express my gratitude.. you all are shining souls..true givers.. Thank You!!!

    RS:)

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  16. Mr. WalkerApril 15, 2012 at 10:11 AM

    Beautiful and powerful.

    Richard

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  17. CYNOSUREApril 15, 2012 at 10:19 AM

    simply WOW... :)

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