Friday, April 6, 2012

Fragrance Spills...



April 7, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..

 
Prompt: Forgive
 
Fragrance Spills
 
“ Forgive me”
she says politely;
rose trembles

Rose trembles
she quietly plucks it;
fragrance spills

Fragrance spills;
withering rose smiles
forgiveness..


II.


“I am sorry.”
“It’s alright; it happens.”
happy couple..


RS:)

18 comments:

  1. Lovely set! withering rose smiles...beautiful thought...
    and the second one...Very cute haiku :)

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  2. aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Oh my... this is emotional..for me..it really is..

    so beautiful sir. each haiku of yours beats the previous one at flow and serenity. :)
    loved it, rameshji.

    thank you so much..

    in deed, fragrance spills, forgiveness.
    thank youuu.....

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  3. awesome set of Haiku...
    second was great...sweet and lovely... :)

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  4. I enjoyed these haiku so much. I really like the image that " withering rose smiles forgiveness.." The last one is very true.

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  5. Wow... reading your Haiku brings a wave of a very happy feeling! :) Liked the whole concept of it...

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  6. rameshji, here's one post i wrote long back :
    http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2011/09/28/pencil-eraser-and-a-memory/

    i now see, how short, sweet and elegant haiku can be while all the same depicting a deep and profound theme. thank you. :)

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  7. Fantastic set of haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Forgiveness is the key of a happy couple ~

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  9. The first haiku sings with a beautiful radiance! The idea of spilling fragrance is like a little magic in an enchanting painting!

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  10. loved the simplicity of the last one ...and the profoundness of the connect....

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  11. A happy couple forever sharing. Love is bliss but at odd times elusive! Great haiku write, Ramesh!

    Hank

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  12. Wonderfully composed Ramesh. Love the set on roses. Thank you for this contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge.

    Namaste

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  13. These are lovely haiku to read, Ramesh.

    best wishes, Marleen Hulst

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  14. Ha..for the second one...I wonder who was forgiving who?
    And what exactly happened?hmmmmmmmmm

    The first one was very delicate and beautiful.

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  15. Such a beautiful story, from where your words come Rameshji? I feel the place is something beyond the heaven,coz heaven is in material world.

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