Friday, October 12, 2012

Pieces of Apple..



Written for

Haiku My Heart   
Haiku Heights



A layer of juice
shrouds the edge of shining knife;
 pieces of apple

pieces of apple
leave their mark on the glass plate;
a layer of juice


RS:)

16 comments:

  1. I like your example - apples are all around us ~

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  2. A layer of juice ... sublime poetry !!!

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  3. a snapshot of a single event....lovely....

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  4. "shrouds the edge of shining knife;".... love that line!

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  5. Love the apples. Great picture you painted.

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  6. Just lovely Ramesh, "shrouds the edge of the shining knife" has so many layers of meaning...

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  7. Yes, descriptive, alluring, very tasty, wonderful


    Peace

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  8. Very different take on 'shroud', nice cascade.

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  9. The little things we tend to overlook.. and so many people fail to notice.. Nice Haiku!!

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  10. Love the cascade, and takes me away from more sinister meaning of shroud

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  11. Apples around me everywhere and I love apple juice...Awesome piece of work.. :)

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  12. My favourite so far! Loved it totally! :)

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