Wednesday, October 3, 2012

Dignity of Tears

Written for:


Dignity; Lacerate; Ripe


Dignity of Tears


Ripened heart bleeds,
ignorance lacerates love;
dignity of tears

Dignity of tears
doesn't let her make them flow;
He does not notice

He does not  notice;
so much for his unripened
sensibilities



RS:)


7 comments:

  1. Love the repetitions! No matter how many hints we give, sometimes others never understand!

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  2. Lovely and poignant tribute to unshed tears.

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  3. An interesting cycle through the prompts.

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  4. "so much for his unripened
    sensibilities"

    wonderful ending, completing the story and vision

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  5. RS: NICE WORDS GIVING RESPECT TO TEARS

    TO SHARE WITH YOU FEW THOUGHTS FOR DIGINITY OF TEARS

    THESE TEARS DO NOT KNOW ANY BOUNDARIES
    WHEN I LAUGH THEY FALLOUT TO SHARE MY HAPPINESS
    WHEN I CRY THEY FALLOUT TO SHARE MY GRIEF
    THESE TEARS READS THE BOUNDARIES OF MY HEART.
    TRAVEL OF THESE TEARS READS EVERY LINE ON MY FACE
    THE EVERY EXPERIENCES LIVED AND SHARED IN LIFE.

    JSJ

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