Friday, October 5, 2012

Doors Open In Heart(h)



Saturday IST 1227 hrs..
Written for


Prompt: Home


Doors Open In Heart(h)


Ah, she is busy
keeping and making her home;
a beautiful world


A beautiful world
where love spills from each moment;
doors open in Heart(h)

doors open in Heart(h)
each dream comes rolling in joy,
goes away laughing


Goes away laughing
let the footprints fade away;
ah, she is busy..


RS:)


Also Shared With Rebecca's Haiku My Heart



17 comments:

  1. Nice cascading haiku...the way the home should be ~

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  2. Enjoyed the circularity of this, RS. Well done.

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  3. Always busy ... to make her home ... HOME

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  4. Lovely effect with the cascade! Heart(h) -very clever!

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  5. this is a perfect joyful outpouring of love,
    thank you ramesh for a cascade of joy!

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  6. Wow! I love the lines - 'each dream comes rolling in joy,
    goes away laughing'

    Live to die at home!

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  7. I'd like to live in your home! Wonderful

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  8. I love it especially your "A beautiful world
    where love spills from each moment".. So sweet, reminds me of my Mom, my home - ♥

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  9. Another wonderful set,about the joys of making a home.

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  10. Very well written...loved th stanza...she is busy making her home a beautiful world!

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  11. Reminds me of my home and I can picture my mom working away to make her house beautiful!

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  12. I don't know why, but the (h) makes me think of a rolling piece of coal :)

    The haiku is of course, quite nice.

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