Saturday, October 27, 2012

Practicing Witch & A Wooden Man


Prompt: Witch

Practicing Witch & A Wooden Man


Ah, she holds her spouse
under a magical trance;
A practicing witch..

A practicing witch;
spell bound with her overtures
a wooden man, he..

A wooden man he;
gets nightmares about the day when
he went witch-hunting …

He went witch-hunting;
sometimes gets a smile carved,
 amity prevails
  

RS:)


To be shared with OSI Prompt 'Amity' tomorrow..


16 comments:

  1. This was a nice story of the wooden man and the witch ... great going !!!

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  2. Witch hunting can be very dangerous. You gotta be careful about what you catch...

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  3. Good one Ramesh, witch hunt ... mmm ... a little bit of history. Witches nowadays are just man and woman living close to nature and using all what's given ....

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  4. He found what he was looking for but didn't like what he got. Nice story:)

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  5. Nice with-hunting. And a nice haiku.

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  6. He is most surely under her spell, and it seems like they get on famously!

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  7. Love the wooden man and the witch -- reminds me of my favorite, the wizard of oz.
    Nice haiku journey

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  8. I enjoyed this haiku story Ramesh, love the flow to it.

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  9. Powerful haiku cascade, Ramesh, poor hubby!
    Scary that "smile carved"...
    Very well written, as usual.
    :)

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  10. I like your idea of a practicing witch! Keep that "smile carved"!

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  11. Wow! I had to read it twice... very beautifully carved ur haiku! :)


    Black witch reins tonight!

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  12. I like that witch-hunting then mesmerized by a smile...so "Amity" prevails! :-)

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  13. I enjoyed your second take as well Ramesh. What a beautiful October poem full of magic and wit.

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