Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Rattling Sound of Your Thoughts


Written for:



Rattle, Know, Calm


Rattling Sound of Your Thoughts


Rattling sound
of your thoughts,
in my mind,
you know
make me lose
my calm..

Ah, your presence
is more comforting
than your thoughts..


RS:)

8 comments:

  1. Yes, to be with a loved one is better than just thinking of her/him.

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  2. presence is always better then hearing their thoughts.

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  3. There's nothing like the genuine presence of a beloved friend. Thank you for this poem.

    Thanks, also, for your comments on my blog.

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  4. enjoyed your poem! sometimes your last stanza is so true!

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