Monday, October 13, 2014

Someone Is Happy.. Haiku

Haiku Horizons prompt “drum”




A distant sound of
drumbeats breaks night's silence;
someone is happy

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Someone is happy;
drumbeats and sound of her
musical anklets

**

Musical anklets;
a bit of sky too is lit
as flames dance too


RS:)

10 comments:

  1. I like the musical anklets. Happiness transmitted through dancing.
    Nice haikul

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  2. I love your haiku, Ramesh. I felt as though I was there as I read it; the flames, the lady happily dancing with her anklets tinkling, and the sound if the drumbeats. It is very well written.

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  3. Very nice. I like the story in you poetry.

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  4. This is a great series -- but I really enjoy the third in the series -- beautiful, powerful, sensual at the same time. :)

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  5. As always, she is lovely!!!
    And so is your haiku sir :)

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  6. The "first" is perfect in it's imagery and language. My favorite as it can stand alone

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  7. You do these sets so well everytime. I have to give that a try sometime. :)-

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  8. love thse series one rolling into another ... great read!

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  9. A beautiful and complex story in simple words... love it!

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