Monday, May 11, 2015

Fair - Haiku..

Prompt : Fair

Haiku Horizons




low sugar
and I rush to a doctor;
earth quake 




RS:)

8 comments:

  1. Did this really happen? Your haiku certainly conveys an immediacy and the movement of "earthquake".

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  2. so do not munch too many chocolates and cakes. else the after- math will be more severe than any earthquake. hahah.

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  3. high sugar
    you will explode into
    frosted cream puffs

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  4. well well... do take care... :-)
    Hey RS - do hop over to Drishti someday... would love your feedback on my Haikus... here's a link on the same prompt...
    http://drishti.co/2015/05/13/apartheid/

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  5. I did visit your blog.. at Drishti and found it to be very interesting.. Wanted to leave a comment.. couldn't reach there.. Don't know why..

    Keep writing.. You write well..

    RS:)

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  6. Hey thank you so much RS... am elated...
    well the Disqus platform may take a while to load if the internet is slow... considering changing it.. so I can get feedback from veterans like you... Cheers and have a lovely evening :-)

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  7. I enjoyed the immediacy of this poem.

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