Written for One Single Impression
Prompt : Baloon
( Thanks Harshadji for the prompt..)
Red baloon;
blowing air with force
I turn blue..
*
As a curious child
I would look at Moon
and often think
It was a shining baloon
My eyes would wander
looking for a hanging thread
But then I grew-up
and learnt the truth instead..
*
I draw smiles and smiles
on a baloon and release it;
It will rain somewhere..
RS:)
Very sweet verses :-)
ReplyDeleteOh! last one is excellent, Superb.
ReplyDeleteSure, it will rain somewhere. In fact it is!
beautiful!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyable - especially the middle one. Great rhyme.
ReplyDeleteBrings memories, Ramesh. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThe main memory is of our daughter when she was a child of five or six. She had just gotten glasses to wear and we were walking in the evening. She looked up into the sky and saw the moon.
She exclaimed, "Look Daddy, there really is a 'man in the moon. '"
I love the imagery. The moon is a balloon. I love the unique and childlike eyes you write this from.
ReplyDeleteLovely set...The third one is so joyful....
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