Friday, January 18, 2013

A Clear Sky



Sunday OSI : Retirement
Saturday Haiku heights: Disk
&
Today Friday for Haiku My Heart
 
 
A Clear Sky
 
Ah, crescent
shines gloriously;
a clear sky
 
A clear sky;
stars try to make an
 impression  
 
Impression
on mind is blurred;
dusk descends
 
Dusk descends;
mind begins to plan
retirement
 
Retirement -
I wipe out the word;
heart renews
 
Heart renews
as light filters through;
ah, crescent
 
Ah, crescent
shines gloriously;
a clear sky..
 
 
RS:)
 
 

25 comments:

  1. I like the story here, the worries and the quickly tossing them in the bin.. enter happiness.

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  2. Beautifully said ... you have captured dusk perfectly :-)

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  3. I too am wiping out the word retirement, since it is not something I will ever be able to do!

    Love Story

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  4. Lovely cascading haiku ~ 'retirement' is a statement of mind to me ~ doubt you were ever a 'retiring person' ~ You probably will always create ~ isn't that being productive? and moving on to the next stage ~ just my thoughts ~

    (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  5. Ramesh, I love your cascading haiku.

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  6. Best lines: "retirement/I wipe out the word/ I like that!

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  7. Retirement from one cascade to embrace the next. Forever retiring from one precious moment to the next.

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  8. Perhaps night will fall on one phase of life and the sun will rise on something else wonderful!!

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  9. I love the clear sky you paint here, Ramesh. It is full of glory and wonder.

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  10. Wow! Why dusk had to mean giving up! I liked you tossed aside the idea.

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  11. The prompts flowed through this beautifully.

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  12. For sure retirement isn't for everyone.

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  13. I love the optimism in your cascade. Retire or not, keep that clear sky in sight!

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  14. This is great! I'm madly hoping for retirement soon. :-)

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  15. just promise you never retire from writing haiku!
    ramesh, you are a genius! thank you for being here sharing your beauty.

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  16. I like your 'retirement' at dusk, Ramesh.

    Chain haiku are hard for me to read but this one goes fairly smoothly.
    ..

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  17. love your haiku here - each and every one of them.

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  18. Hello Ramesh ji..I am so happy to visit you after so long! Pardon my absence, I know you will :)

    Nice set of haiku here..I love the transition from dusk to night to morning.Thank you :)

    http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/2013/01/dusk.html

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  19. Wipe out the word! Yes that is what one will want to do.

    A state of denial nicely captured.

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  20. Thoughts - like forgotten shells on the shore; we pick them up, take a peek inside and then put them back down. A few steps ahead, we might find another one.

    Wonderful haiku.

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  21. I enjoy your compositions with this form. "light filters through" - I love that image!

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  22. Awesome as always. Soaked in your haiku! :-)

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  23. This ends on a positive note... I like it.
    Eliz

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  24. Wonderful outlook on life my friend. Nicely said.


    Melanie

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