Friday, October 25, 2013

Childhood - Haiku



Written for

Haiku Heights : Rummage
and shared with Haiku My Heart


emptied on the floor
a drawer lies next to me;
my childhood crawls out




Added on Sunday especially for Haiku Heights



my intense search fails
for that first ever letter;
she reads from her mind


RS:)


14 comments:

  1. nice one; have a good weekend

    much love...

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  2. metaphorically it sometimes happen that way ~ huh? Lovely haiku ~ happy weekend to you ~ carol

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  3. Oh my! I hope it wasn't some critters you stashed away long ago! :)

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  4. This is simply delightful, Ramesh! I love it! (It would make a great children's picture-book story.)

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  5. This is so lovely RS. My childhood crawls out.

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  6. The childhood crawling out, this is your master stroke. Too good!

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  7. A most excellent image! Well done.

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  8. childhood crawling out presents such a nice picture, brilliant take on the prompt RS :)

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  9. The second one is intense. Hope the letter is not full of pain.

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  10. The first haiku touched me deeply Ramesh.

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  11. Amazing what we can find amid the clutter in a drawer. Brilliant.

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  12. 2nd one is a beauty...
    So beautiful!!!

    Plz follow the link for mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.com/2013/10/alcoholic.html

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  13. It seems we all have a drawer or box of childhood treasures. Fun read. It opened the treasure box of my mind regarding childhood.

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  14. I especially like the line "my childhood crawls out." Great job!

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