Thursday, January 16, 2014

River of Light Flows..



Anxious, Devoted, Scrawny..

Shared with Haiku Heights..for Grimace.. the last Haiku...too...


River of Light Flows..


scrawny off-spring and
anxious, devoted mom;
oh, world is so cold..

Oh, world is so cold;
snow covers the scrawny tree
and my words shiver

And my words shiver,
I look for the warmth of Moon;
river of light flows

River of light flows
yet grimace on her face;
ah, scrawny off-spring


RS:)

9 comments:

  1. I look for the warmth of Moon;
    river of light flows

    Some lights are welcomed in the cold! Wonderful cascades Ramesh!

    Hank

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  2. Sometimes light is not enough to wrap up the world and keep it safe..still always worth seeing it though..

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  3. Nice progression...enjoyed your river of words♪ http://lauriekazmierczak.com/transformation/

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  4. nice haiku set...loved the words- 'river of light'

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  5. I enjoyed the raw and vivid imagery and narrative of this haiku set. Exceptional. :-)

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  6. luv the circular pattern of your haiku sequence; Have a nice Saturday;

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  7. Warmth of the moon.! An original thought. enjoyed reading it.

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