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Monday, January 19, 2015
I Gift Her Haiku...
Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
A Haiku's lament; "Why show a picture with me, then what will I show" ** She shows me night sky and a half cut hanging Moon; I gift her haiku
The second one is so lovely!ReplyDelete
I love the second haiku - "half cut hanging moon" is WONDERFUL!ReplyDelete
I'm not quite sure about the first haiku. I can't get my brain to work!
Is this the gist (in my words)?
A Haiku's lament;
"Why show a picture to me?
nothing left to know"
Judy, Haiku is supposed to let the reader create a visual in the mind.. That's what has been the purpose of my write-up..Hope it clarifies..Delete
Your write in fact too give a meaning like that..
I love "a half cut hanging moon." Brilliant!. :-)ReplyDelete
What a lovely sesries...the first prepares us for a true show of a tender image...beautifully penned!!ReplyDelete
I know I can count on you for a bit of romance. I especially sighed with the second.ReplyDelete
Haiku is one of the best gifts you can possibly give.ReplyDelete
Showing Off Its Coat