Written for Haiku Horizons..
Shared with Friday's Haiku My Heart
Hopeful raindrops fall
in the puddle of water;
of my friends from all stages;
musty, rough weathers
Musty , rough weathers;
ah, forming newer circles
life goes in circles...
Life goes in circles;
she keeps holding my hand tight
lest I fall away..
This haiku cascade pulled my heart and brought tears to my eyes. The vanishing circles and new circles come with a kind of rootless sadness. Then her hand is there as an anchor. And I know too well that even that will be spun away. Excellent work.ReplyDelete
One of the most beautiful haiku-flow you've written. The last line is so perfect. It should be put to music.
Beyond my comprehension I suppose...ReplyDelete
very beautiful Ramesh. I can visualize it all through your words.ReplyDelete
holding your hand too my dear friend through all the seasons.ReplyDelete
ah, this haiku circle.
Hi, Ramesh. I like simple poems with deep meanings. Life is indeed a cycle. It's a circle of like. :)ReplyDelete
*life. Typo error. :DDelete