Monday, November 30, 2015

He Creates A Hole In the Sky....

Written for Haiku Horizons Prompt: Ground
Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...

He Creates A Hole In the Sky....

He flutters his wings
for the flight beyond skies;
firm feet on the ground

Firm feet on the ground;
he creates a hole in the sky
with a sharp resolve

With a sharp resolve
he lands in a starry maze;
a slippery ground

A slippery ground
up there confounds him;
he flutters his wings

He flutters his wings
for flying back to ground;
she had always known..



  1. a lovely cascading haiku, well-penned :)

  2. Very nice, Ramesh. Tells a whole story, beginning to end.

  3. Lovely. I enjoy your cascade form and romantic narrative flow.

  4. The flow of cascades are so nice and you have written of it very well!

  5. This truly made me smile, what a lovely romantic story! :)