Written for Jingle Poetry at The Gooseberry Garden....
picked up the theme as.. Snow..
He Filled His Hands With Snowflakes..
He filled his hands
And let them slip through
To fall in her hands
As she waited in excitement
Just like that moment…
RS : )
just like that moment. . ."
Is that perfect - YES!
Really lovely and so true how time is like a snowflake - precious, unique and ever changing into another element.
O dear melting moment!ReplyDelete
Loved it...so serene so passionate so true....
Cant believe it I saw a whole movie in just few lines..
But I knw....picture abhi baki hai mere dost...so looking forward to the series of melting moments..well i dint say anything I'm only hinting!
~ Happy Holidays!
Such disappointment here, Ramesh! Ah, unrequited love!ReplyDelete
Spirit of Christmas
Very nice write, Ramesh! very visual wording!ReplyDelete
I feel the coldness of snow now.
Oh Ramesh, this is so beautifully romantic! xoXoxReplyDelete