Sunday, March 4, 2012

Tombs of Attraction


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HAIKU
Written for One Single Impression
Prompt: Underground


Tombs of Attraction

Underground tunnels;
I try to find a way out
of maze of my mind..


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Buried underground
ancient kings still weild power;
tombs of attraction


RS:)

12 comments:

  1. Shallow waters run deep....sir, but your poetic essence is far more deeper.......

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  2. The last stanza (or haiku, or whatever I should call it) made me immediately think of both Indiana Jones and the Mummy-movies... Which is really good!!! *smile* Well painted picture!

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  3. The second is heroic, I love it. The first is thoughtful, I can feel your pondering.

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  4. Maze of mind. Excellent expression.

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  5. Myth and mind are subjects I always enjoy. Especially the maze connection.

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  6. Two wonderful haikus. You've woven so much through your short poems. Nicely written Ramesh.

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  7. That maze is the hardest to escape...
    Very nice haikus!
    Best, M.

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  8. I would get clostraphobia down in those tunnels. I doublt the ancient king could help much with that.

    We have a pedestrian tunnel system under ground in Houston. It goes for miles and has shops and restaurants, etc, all along.
    ..

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  9. Why are we so attracted to dead kings? (It's a question I can't answer!)


    Underground Streams

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  10. The maze is too complex difficult to find a way out.. time still hold the answers

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