Prompts: Lenient, Fog, Struggle..
Love Loves to Forgive.
She struggles to see
through the thick fog of doubt;
he stands firm
on his slippery ground
for he knows, like always
she will take a lenient view
of his misadventures..
And life will go on
as it has always gone
she reads his mind
and hers too
smiles and says..
“ Welcome, home.. whatever..”
Staying behind the fog
she shuns struggle
and prays, “ May God too
take a lenient view.."
Love loves to forgive.. isn't it..
I loved it...Love loves to forgive...you have used some of the words so beautifully - "slippery ground", "misadventures"....this ws really thought provoking ..wonderful !!!ReplyDelete
there is some hesitation in this thought perhaps..as the old saying goes maybe it forgives but doesn't forget..jaeReplyDelete
I have been away and return to see your special poem for Three Word Wednesday - your thoughts very similar to my own. I enjoyed it very much.ReplyDelete
Yes, love loves to forgive. I hope each forgave the other and he stopped his transgressions to earn her forgiveness.ReplyDelete
Love loves to forgive hopefully he is truly sorry.ReplyDelete
cooly wise, sometimes love loves to forgive.ReplyDelete
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"he stands firmReplyDelete
on his slippery ground"
I love conflicting ideas in your piece :)
Too many people forgive because of love, but it is a harder thing for them to also forget...ReplyDelete