Written
for
Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart - Friday
Leo's Haiku
Heights - Saturday
(Prompt: Breeze)
Sandy's & Andree's OSI - Sunday..
Prompt: Unlimited
Joy Unlimited
Joy unlimited;
morning breeze carries songs
from a fading night…
From a fading night
From a fading night
emerges a glowing dawn;
sunbeams dance on dew
Sunbeams dance on dew;
Sunbeams dance on dew;
happy rose opens its heart,
her touch picks fragrance
Her touch picks fragrance;
delighted she inhales joy,
eyes gleam and face glows
Eyes gleam and face glows,
Eyes gleam and face glows,
she is one with the moment;
Joy unlimited
Words brought perfectly around to meet again.
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One with the moment is the best place to be, or so I've heard. I rarely am...
ReplyDeleteOld Willow Woman
A full circle of joy Ramesh! Enjoy the day, enjoy the weekend.
ReplyDeleteA lovely cascading haiku with a wise message, to live in the moment.
ReplyDeleteunlimited enjoyment reading your poem!
ReplyDeleteThis is so uplifting. It makes me for joyful reading it.
ReplyDeleteJoy unlimited ... a perfect way to live life !!!
ReplyDeleteSo soft and utterly romantic. Almost like a psalm
ReplyDeleteNo limit to how much joy
ReplyDeleteone may enjoy...
it's a bottomless pot ♥♥
A lovely circle dance of words ~ Joy haiku ~ what an enlightened soul you must be ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank you for the reminder: We are part of it all.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to be one with the moment' as often as possible!
ReplyDeletedear ramesh,
ReplyDeletethis is absolutely gorgeous! with your tender words you have filled each reader with JOY! thank you for your place in my haiku heart!
Joy is always good. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteNice circle - both of haiku and of time.
ReplyDeleteAh, Ramesh, of all I know you are indeed ONE WITH THE MOMENT.
ReplyDeleteJoy indeed. I really enjoyed this one and the imagery captured in your words.
ReplyDeletei like how you tied it all together in the ending it gave it beautiful finality,
ReplyDeleteI enjoy your work. I'm pulled along from line to line then stitched in a neat circle. I resonate with the circular form.
ReplyDeleteJoy unlimited indeed, wonderfully woven words...
ReplyDeleteRamesh.... I have always enjoyed reading your blog and highly value your comments.
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being one with the moment almost always bring peace and joy. I enjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteNice use of the prompt, Ramish. A very pretty tribute to a lovely lady.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this interesting prompt.
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Lovely and flowing words.
ReplyDeleteFabulous. Great use of repetition to build theme and momentum through the piece.
ReplyDeleteExcellent melding of three haiku.
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