My 695th Post
Embarrass, Backfire, Taste
His ideas, born
in her mind,
He never tasted failure
'cos that was left
for her to taste,
stingy and bitter
if ever it happened
because of her ideas
born in his mind..
But then she flew,
he cut her wings ...
And now she's free...?ReplyDelete
Almost sounds like abuse. am I right?ReplyDelete
Interesting way this reflects itself.ReplyDelete
Great use of three words. Please read my attempt.
yes, i do hope she is free and tasting both the good and bad tidings of her ideas:)ReplyDelete
enjoyed the read
Intriguing perspectives--parallel realities. Nice.ReplyDelete
Thank you for posting. Peace and all good things for you in poetry and in life.