Wednesday, February 6, 2013

He Cut Her Wings...


My 695th Post

Written for



Embarrass, Backfire, Taste


His ideas, born
in her mind,
never backfired..
no embarrassments
He never tasted failure
'cos that was left
for her to taste,
stingy and bitter
if ever it happened
because of  her ideas
born in his mind..
But then she flew,
because
he cut her wings  ...



RS:)
 

5 comments:

  1. Almost sounds like abuse. am I right?

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  2. Interesting way this reflects itself.

    Great use of three words. Please read my attempt.

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  3. yes, i do hope she is free and tasting both the good and bad tidings of her ideas:)
    enjoyed the read

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  4. Intriguing perspectives--parallel realities. Nice.

    Thank you for posting. Peace and all good things for you in poetry and in life.

    Diane

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