May 25 , 2013 Saturday
Written for Haiku Heights - Saturday, OSI - Sunday
Written for Haiku Heights - Saturday, OSI - Sunday
Shared with Haiku My Heart -Friday
Prompt: Health..
Morning Sun's first rays
write happiness on her face;
her healthy breakfast
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Prompt: Weak
Her healthy breakfast;
no more weak appetite,
she loves sunrise dish
stunning =)
ReplyDelete"Sunrise dish"
ReplyDeleteNice one!!!
gamma rays... cancer? I am sorry if I am wrong.
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Yes, I got confused..well have edited and changed the words...hope it gives better meaning now..
DeleteRS:)
Very nice...uplifting.
DeletePeace
Siggi
Mind blowing Haiku!
ReplyDeleteI too loved your sunrise dish:)
ReplyDeletenice couplet a happy Sunday to you
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Dawn and happiness in one. nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI like "sunrise dish". Charming haiku.
ReplyDeleteThere's nothing better than a good breakfast!
ReplyDeleteDreamy words Ramesh. I love this line "write happiness on her face."
ReplyDeleteBest breakfast to have! Excellent.
ReplyDeleteGot to have that healthy breakfast. Nice haiku! :)
ReplyDeleteHealthy breakfast!!! What an incredibly creative interpretation. DEEEEEEEElicious
ReplyDeletesunrise dish,,,,,sounds yummy
ReplyDeletea beautiful take on haiku prompt :)
ReplyDeleteRicha