Wednesday, December 25, 2013

I see a candle getting lit..






Exquisite, Magnificent, Crisp

I  See a Candle Getting Lit..

None can take away
the joyous vibrations and 
the elation one experiences 
while saying or hearing 
delicious words like
"Magnificently beautiful, 
Exquisitely fabulous,
Splendidly glittering
Marvelously glowing...
Wow...it's superb.."
Doesn't matter if winter 
descends on some hearts
Yet compliments make 
Ice too  feel the warmth
Ah, I  see a candle getting lit..


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Her crisp compliment
leaves a magnificent taste;
exquisite timing


RS:)



11 comments:

  1. Clever use of the words Ramesh..wrapped up so expertly and glowingly...and the haiku..the icing on the cake..

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    1. Thanks Jae.. it is always a delight to read you and find you visiting me...here and encouraging too..

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  2. I haven't been around for some time, but I see you are as brilliant as ever.
    Lovely haiku.

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  3. Nice poem! I really liked the title...:)

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  4. Winter descends on some hearts
    Just to get the right background
    The right ambience for a camp fire
    With poetry for company
    Memories for symphony
    And new resolves as the spirit that runs through the spine and warms us up to life anew with intoxicating confidence

    Regards
    RM

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  5. Yeah, the words influence us ... sometimes before we get absorbed them with our brain...~ nice take on the prompt

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  6. None indeed can take away those feelings of ours. We own them and they are precious indeed. Words, touch, looks their timing is so important and are felt inside.

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  7. Warma and beautiful put a smile on my face thank you enjoyed this write. Blessings

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  8. love how the light shines through.... the 'ku is just as it should be... beautiful

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  9. Ah, but we must resist the temptation to filter the comments through our own cynicism.

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  10. a crisp comment
    a crisp haiku
    is
    a nice concept
    like
    a cool heart of a lettuce

    Wow
    Another slice of haiku magic:)

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