Sunday, December 8, 2013

Rivulet - Haiku



Written for Haiku Heights

Rivulet..





Water spills from glass;
she draws a rivulet
with her finger tip..



RS:)

17 comments:

  1. This was what I did in my childhood much to the irritation of my mom. very practical one.

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  2. Yes, I can see it:)

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  3. :-) simple..
    wonderful

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  4. You can picture the woman in your poem. A perfect haiku Ramesh!

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  5. So few words to create such a sensuous vision

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  6. Brought back memories of good old days...Nicely done as always RS:)

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  7. I could see her do that...
    Awesome as always!!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

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  8. Wow, Very romantic.

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