Sunday, August 10, 2014

A Happy Haiku..



Written for Haiku Horizon
Prompt: Cut


A Happy Haiku...


Sharper rays of sun
cut the things mercilessly;
half moon in the sky

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half moon in the sky;
to keep it five seven five
I cut many words

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I cut many words
yet sun, moon and sky remain ;
a happy haiku  


RS:)

6 comments:

  1. sun and sky
    on those you always
    can rely

    Nice set!

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  2. I agree with one of a class - nice set.

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  3. Yes, with sunmoon and sky you are assured of a happy haiku!

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  4. No matter what you can always count on the sun and sky returning. Nice!

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  5. This is a great series -- but the second one made me chuckle out loud -- loved the humor. :)

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