Friday, August 1, 2014

Ah, loneliness.. Haiku


Rebecca's Haiku My Heart



Strong winds toss around
that little piece of white cloud;
ah, loneliness

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Ah, loneliness;
she doesn't even know how
to write a haiku..

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To write a haiku
and build a world on her palm;
he is in a trance

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He is in a trance;
moments quietly pass by as
God says,"let him be".. 

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God says, "let him be";
her thought stops on the edge 
of his tranquil mind..




RS:)




7 comments:

  1. Poor little cloud. The tranquility will let the thoughts in when they are ready. On my post today, I woke up with the words in my head, out of nowhere, out of sleep. Tranquil. It happens. :)

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  2. May the loneliness be as fleeting as a cloud passing in the sky, while the beauty of these words lingers on.

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  3. Maybe her haiku are written on the wind! ;)

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  4. Love how each fits in the great chain and stands alone. Mt favorite:

    He is in a trance;
    moments quietly pass by as
    God says,"let him be"..

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  5. On the edge of his
    tranquil mind, World of love
    Loneliness melt

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  6. There is also a joy to be lonely....though it is for a short time. When loneliness shatter its like a new day.....

    Loneliness shattered
    Her voice knocked doors
    Sun shines again.

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  7. when i read your haiku i am swept away.
    truly the depth and wealth of feeling is so instilled in each letter comprising each word. i sit back feeling as satisfied and filled as if you have crafted an entire book that i never want to end.

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