Monday, September 15, 2014

Trained Syllables : Haiku

Written for Haiku Horizons
Prompt : Train..

Trained Syllables


Happy train travel
she carries with her an
 unfinished tale;

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 unfinished tale;
train of imagination halts
at haiku station

**

At haiku station
alight seasonal phrases;
trained syllables

**

Trained syllables
sit in haiku formation;
happy train travel


RS:)


9 comments:

  1. happy train travel
    ramesh is being cryptic
    with his travel tales:)

    Anna Karenina is a great movie . The book is a lengthy tome which I have never completed.:)

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  2. Wow...
    This sounds like a continuation to mine...

    Very glad to read "her" after a break :)

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  3. you must finish Anna K. lol, it was my summer project one year and yes, it is a project!!!!!

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  4. What a wonderful play on words --- loved it :)

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  5. Interesting take on prompt. Loved it.

    Melanie

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  6. I just so love when one haiku creates another and then another ... lovely post!

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  7. I love how your haikus link together so nicely; just like a train. ;-)

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