Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Joy of Giving..

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 -

Day 23 – February 23rd –
Theme: Joy of Giving
Form: (ABC, CDE, EFA) - Haiku





Joy of Giving..

Sun gives light
and tree the fruits;
joy of giving


Joy of giving;
starry night gives solace,
Moon inspires


Moon inspires;
darker corners vanish,
Sun gives light



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Dry Leaf Gets Life


Morning scribbles
her happy love song;
dry leaf gets life


Dry leaf gets life;
flowers sing floating lyrics,
 breeze carries joy


breeze carries joy
night leaves glittering notes,
morning scribbles..




RS:)

9 comments:

  1. Wow! You were ambitious today with 2 haiku! Very nicely done. I love the imagery of the dry leaf and new life with the writing!

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  2. So beautiful...the joy of sun and moon...and the image of a dry leaf gets life

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  3. This rythum seems to suit you so much. The firt lines of each draw me in. Thank you.

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  4. The circle of life. Very nice solar pattern.

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  5. Wow...Loved them both...It's great to describe the beauty of nature and joy of giving :)
    Thanks for sharing :)

    A burning candle

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  6. there is a joy in giving. enjoyed all of these!

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  7. What a pretty picture these haikus bring up!

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  8. Your shining format, Ramesh ... I applaud your creativity and the flowing images you paint. Thank you for sharing. Here is my Day 23.

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  9. beautiful Rameshji.. I am happy to read your Haiku set today.. SmileS..

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