Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...
Dark Alleys Won't Scare..
Ah, she waits
in a dark alley;
Fake smile grows;
covering her soul
she steps in
A dark night
gives hope of a day
won't scare any more;
Ah, she waits..
Broad day light;
I choose to write a
The waiting would be the hardest part, I think...ReplyDelete
Raven Has One Wish
Interesting little tale . . .ReplyDelete
not even your precious moon appeared to lighten your haiku, but your love within remains loyal and present ready to rise.ReplyDelete
gone is the fear ~ you are moving on ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^ReplyDelete
A beautiful touching short story....ReplyDelete
Took my breath away...
Covering her soul she steps in.....and no darkness can touch the soul.. the luminiscent soul..
A story in haiku. Nice one.ReplyDelete
such sadness...the world is filled with it.ReplyDelete
I guess you do what you have to do for the children... Nicely written.ReplyDelete
achingly dark, yet so well written.. it has beauty..ReplyDelete
Dont we all have the fake smile at times?! Beautifully written!ReplyDelete
Sad and beautiful at the same time.ReplyDelete
Dark haiku indeed, but truly wonderful!ReplyDelete