Saturday, May 5, 2012

Love Grows Not


Written for One Single Impression

Prompt: Depression
( Shared with Haiku Heights & Haiku My Heart)

Love Grows Not..

Her tears rain
on his barren heart;
love grows not

***

She finds him
exceedingly nice;
depression..


depression;
mind paints opposites
every hour

RS:)
                                                

10 comments:

  1. Very nice... esp the last haiku...! Mind paints opposites!!! Yes... depression is a time when you think only negative thoughts...

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  2. Great set, but just reading the first set chills my heart.

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  3. the cause of depression not exactly occasional tension.Its because of an encounter with disappointment again and again
    when ''A flow of tears cannot become the cause of the growth of love''

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  4. She sure does (not) know how to pick them doesn't she, Ramesh? Sadness, sadness, all is sadness.
    ..

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  5. last is my fav as well...excellent description

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  6. I love the interplay of your words and how you pivot from one emotion to another. Lovely writing as always Ramesh.

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  7. Nice words expressing, Ramesh!
    Warmly
    Marinela

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