September 29, 2012 Prompt: Battlefield
Her Heart A Battlefield..
Work and life;
battle between her
mind and soul
mind and soul;
mind and soul;
Everyday battles rage
in her heart
shine and glow and smile
no more battles , no
little hearts now dwell in
her happy heart..
It was a battle of my nerves..have I succeeded in saying
what I want to...do let me know...your love encourages.
...'little hearts now dwell in her happy heart' ~ so inspiring ~ lovely set of haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)ReplyDelete
Ah, yes, the birth of someone who matters more than we do creates truce.ReplyDelete
Beautiful lines here ... loved them !!!ReplyDelete
AH...love the tiny footprints!!ReplyDelete
A good ending to these haiku. Tiny footprints, each holding a tiny heart, now dwell where pain had been. These tell quite a story and can be a life experience for so many episodes. Very well done.ReplyDelete
I am moved by this cascsding haiku. Nice take on battlefield in just a different way. Thank you Ramesh.ReplyDelete
I love the last which sums up her battle so well. This is a lovely haiku about the power of love.ReplyDelete
I like the sixth - a lovely, comforting conclusion.ReplyDelete
Wow, nicely done the way you link every verse to the next..ReplyDelete
a beautiful resolution,ReplyDelete
a comfort and path for peace.
so loving and inspiring.ReplyDelete
Oh that is lovely x She is fulfilled xReplyDelete
I love the flow of this one, and I particularly enjoyed the happy ending.ReplyDelete
Battlefields are rarely pleasant places, but you have made this one seem rather inviting!ReplyDelete
I’m late making the rounds from Haiku My Heart Friday. Apologies!
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