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Monday, September 10, 2012
Lies Are Set Aflame..
September 11, 2012 Prompt: Divine
Lies are set aflame;
she hides behind divine to escape heat and smoke..
What a wonderful escape!ReplyDelete
Oh, I like!ReplyDelete
I love the story you narrate behind these words ... amazing !!!ReplyDelete
That first line is divine ~ReplyDelete
Such a common phenomenon these days... on the increase!ReplyDelete
Cradling star rock in pious palms
Very intense haiku and the actions sometimes true.. We do many things " to escape heat and smoke"ReplyDelete
Powerful! One of my favorites.ReplyDelete
Great metaphor in your haiku, well done! :)ReplyDelete
I love the tale you weave in three lines! Well done.ReplyDelete
Very good. This is very apropos for some of the activities in the US right now.ReplyDelete
Deception, lies, secrecy.. You'd be surprised how many hide behind the divine to cover up their secrets as though you could ever really hide from God. Very interesting post indeed! Excellent haiku!ReplyDelete
So much hidden in your haiku; so much blowing with the smoke.ReplyDelete
My hubby said that woman was me, hehehe.
This is stunning Ramesh ... very well written. Brought memories to me of the WTC attacks. I don't think that's what you mean in this one, but ... well ... it's just my feeling.ReplyDelete
Beautiful and powerful statement!ReplyDelete
very impacting ...amazing!!ReplyDelete
This is great!ReplyDelete
RS, I see this but one way, an honor killing..ReplyDelete
Whoa! Is that a safe hiding place?ReplyDelete
very nicely renderedReplyDelete