September 20, 2012 Prompt: Lights
She Rolls Up Some Stars..
she finds her own ‘self’
a glittering world;
stars shine in her eyes;
mind lights up
Mind lights up;
she rolls up some stars,
with a life time gone,
she is there..
Nicely done ...how dark it is ... there always will be light again.ReplyDelete
A lovely contrast of light and dark !!!ReplyDelete
This set is BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it.. Such a variation of feelings inside her head..! I wish a lot of light for her... :)ReplyDelete
I second Green Speck, great contrast!ReplyDelete
I like the hopefulness in this set!ReplyDelete
A kaleidoscope of her feelings. A circle we all travel at times I think. I like it.ReplyDelete
Lovely cascades Ramesh! Light and darkness in unison!ReplyDelete
Nice journey from darkness to light inside and outside. No shadows in your clear haiku.ReplyDelete
This is wonderful. I really like the final piece.ReplyDelete
This is a beautiful chain - the idea of the mind lighting up is wonderful.ReplyDelete
NIcely done Ramesh!ReplyDelete
And very true..
light and darkness go hand in hand ...two sides of the same coin..nice cascading.. :)ReplyDelete
glad to see lights change her mind.ReplyDelete
Love these, Ramesh. Beautiful chain.ReplyDelete
I like that! Nice!ReplyDelete
stars blink naughtily,ReplyDelete
love the playfulness in your work.
invite you to join poets rally today.
oh i love the idea of rolling up some stars!ReplyDelete
i hope your day is full of warmth and your night stunning with starlight!