September 30, 2012
( Thank God, it's free)
Will She Be Herself?
She is a daughter
a sister, a wife , a mother;
will she be herself
Will she be herself
she has often wondered;
silent skies listen
Silent skies listen
ah, whenever she looks up;
no, free answers fall
No free answers fall;
she continues to strive, ah
'She' of my haiku…
My ode to women culminates with the prompt
from Rachana..whose name translates into 'Creation'
Hope Creation finds my final Ode to 'She'..worthy..
THANK YOU …..LEO
Lovely ode to women ... wonderful !!!ReplyDelete
Ramesh--some similar thoughts floated through my mind today regarding the concept of "free." I decided I could in no way do the word justice in a haiku--but you did! Well done.ReplyDelete
Lovely cascading lines ~ I have not written everyday but I did on the last day ~ Thanks for all your visits in my blog ~ReplyDelete
"Silent skies listen" my favorite line. Lovely creative cascade to a lovely Creation.ReplyDelete
A lovely cascading haiku to end the month. I appreciate the line "no free answers fall" Very well done as always.ReplyDelete
What a wonderful closure for this month of writing haiku Ramesh. Nice cascading haiku series, you're te master of this cascade-form. Thank you for all your visits during September Heights. Please visit Carpe Diem at: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/ReplyDelete
The 'She' of your haiku is a lucky woman! They are all wonderful, and I have enjoyed every one.ReplyDelete
That was a lovely series. Thanks for all the thoughtfulness throughout the month.ReplyDelete
Your cascading haiku gives me inspiration to try this form. Thanks for a month of lovely poems!ReplyDelete
Lovely cascading haiku! Your thoughts flow like a river....Beautifully composed!ReplyDelete
Peace in prison
inspirational work of your usual high standardReplyDelete
"She" has been great inspiration for you this month. Lovely. I've enjoyed reading your work and comments on my blog during the September challenge.ReplyDelete
I agree: There are no free answers. We have to work for them!ReplyDelete
Aah!! nice cascade again,,wow!!ReplyDelete
Was under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge ...
Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS...being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull's eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world...Loads of special thanks to each one of you...September had been very exciting and a learning month for me...I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure ...Thanks a lot once again...keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly...