Friday, February 22, 2013

Monday Comes Laughing..


Written for

Rebecca's Haiku My Heart - Friday
(Picking up last line from Rebecca's cascading haiku
to start my haiku cascade here..)
 
Leo's Haiku Heights - Saturday
 
Andree and Sandy's OSI - Sunday..
 
 
Monday Comes Laughing
 
Marry each moment,
give birth to joy, happiness;
stars shimmer in sky
 
Stars shimmer in sky;
Moon plays hide and seek behind
bunch of floating clouds
 
Bunch of floating clouds
move along with happy winds,
her golden strands sway
 
Her golden strands sway;
a cup of tea in his hands
and she takes a sip
 
And she takes a sip
Saturday and Sunday pass,
Monday comes laughing
 
Monday comes laughing;
time keeps ticking, hey, let me
marry each moment... 
 
 
RS:)
 

33 comments:

  1. I love the way you went around. It is so encouraging. Beautifully written.

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  2. Laughing Mondays and happy winds... that's the spirit Ramesh! Love your cascading haiku!

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  3. Marryying each moment ... wow, that was lovely !!!

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  4. Very nice. I have read Rebecca's, and i have read yours. These two could be married as well.

    Peace

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  5. beautifully interwoven Ramesh:-)

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  6. Lovely cascading haibun ~ very creative ^_^

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  7. I loved 'marry each moment' when Rebecca said it, and I love it here too!

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  8. Marrying each moment is an art that some of us have not yet mastered...

    Building Sand Castles

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  9. Wow! Such flowing emotions, every haiku passing on the batonto the next so seamlessly. I enjoyed marrying each moment.

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  10. U make the mundane seem so full of life! Learning to view world through your eyes is a gift :)

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  11. Each of these haiku is a perfectly smithed haiku in a lovely chain. Glad I visited to see the silver shimmer of that chain!

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  12. I love the flow of this cascade. With this haiku, Monday will come laughing with joy to us.

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  13. Beautiful way you continued
    Rebecca's line
    into a whole new week.
    I love the way you write a story
    only telling the important parts.
    Laughing Monday♥♥

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  14. I'd love to be a spectator of the moon playing hide and seek.

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  15. A beautiful haiku Ramesh. Deep appreciation of life and love.

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  16. Enjoyed them all, rounded off by a perfect last line.

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  17. Marvelous wordplay!! Life is filled with such joyous moments, if only we could marry each moment...

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  18. This is great!

    Just a reminder that your prompt "unlimited" comes up at OSI next week, March 3. Please provide me with a poem or image for the home page.

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  19. Very beautiful cascading haiku!
    I enjoyed reading Moon playing hide and seek, wonderful thought!

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  20. good advice, marrying moments


    much love...

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  21. "Monday comes laughing" What a joyous poem of celebration and light.

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  22. I agree, "Monday comes laughing". DEEEEEEEELIGHTFUL
    what a wonderful sentiment!

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  23. I love the idea of Monday coming laughing. Very cheering! This would also fit the One Single Impression prompt (Monday).

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  24. cascades! you make the form seem so simple

    got to love mondays! not. haha

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  25. Amazing!!all the lines have a magical touch of a wonderful imagination...THx for sharing such superb styles!!WELL DONE! God<3U

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  26. I am going to marry each moment. inspired by your words.

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  28. each haiku a work of art enjoyed them one and all

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  29. Loved the sequence and the fact that each haiku stands on its own, tyoo. Beautiful!

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  30. Beautifully said.
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