Sunday, May 19, 2013

Dry Leaf Cracks

Written for OSI
 
 
 
Prompt: Flow..

Three Haiku...
 
 
 My thoughts flow
in rhythmic silence;
morning breeze
 
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Morning breeze
makes her long hair flow;
dry leaf cracks
 
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Dry leaf crack
she passes by, quiet;
my thoughts flow
 
 
RS:)
 
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7 comments:

  1. she should turn and look.....and for a little while stop the flow.....

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  2. I can feel the flow and the obvious undercurrent as well. Beautiful work, RS.

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  3. And great flow to the words, too.

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  4. There is music in dry leaves too :-)

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  5. I can feel the morning breeze and see it flow through her hair. Stunning poem Ramesh.

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