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Wednesday, December 8, 2010
Fears Unfair Judgement.....Haikus
Written for 3WW... judge, nightfall, safety
Birds judge approaching Nightfall, return to warm Safety of home trees..
Comes nightfall, snuggles She in safety of four walls, Fears unfair judgment.. *****
The beauty of coming home - for birds or people..they worked brilliantly together..JaeReplyDelete
Yaa, Really Nice!! Reminded me of coming home from my Hostel Days!! :)ReplyDelete
Lovely images. Well done.ReplyDelete
Both very true!! ...and both lovely Haiku compositions.ReplyDelete
Looks like nightfall hurries everyone to the safety of their homes and night demands a fair judgement, when it is such a beautiful time with the stars twinkling blue and the pale moon gliding across the inky blue sky!!
Hope that is some more inspiration Rameshji!! :D
Awesomely done! Short and crisp...ReplyDelete
Succinct and so comforting haikus...ReplyDelete
The word "safety" made it so!
Lovely rendition Ramesh!!!
what can be safer than coming home...for birds as well as for us...beautiful haikus...they spread safety :)ReplyDelete
Perfect choice of the words Ramesh, enjoyed it ):ReplyDelete
Take care x
I love the way you write. This is another great couple of pieces. Love and Light, SenderReplyDelete
good one, home is where the heart is! :)ReplyDelete