Written for Haiku Heights prompt: Life and OSI prompt: WIN
Birds hop from tree to
Tree, greeting life, winning
Hearts for the day..
Heart and mind
Fight each other, heart wins,
Written for OSI Prompt: WIN & LOL : Fishy
Nothing Fishy Here..
Heart had pushed me
To put a poem, a long one
Mind resisted, I Contemplated,
Decided to make mind win..
So removed it..quietly
Need to take a back seat
For the larger good,
In this case , for the good
Of the visitor, that's YOU..
Nothing fishy here please..
Interesting take on Life, Ramesh!ReplyDelete
Great take on the prompt both in the two Haikus and the excellent poem!!ReplyDelete
Loved your haikus better. :)ReplyDelete
Great take RS!!
Always fun to read you.
Wonderful haikus.. Great to have you on my blog.. I have replied to comment window type too..ReplyDelete
--Someone is Special--
celebration of life when heart wins a battle over mind? wow.. what a beautiful haiku, Rji :)ReplyDelete
I love your haikus. And "Nothing Fishy Here" was one I completely related to. As always, your blog is a pleasure to visit! Uplifting and honest, always.ReplyDelete
It's so good when the heart wins!ReplyDelete
I absolutely love that second haiku! While I usually enjoy your longer poems, I had to chuckle at your contest between mind and heart.ReplyDelete
Win of heart is always more satisfying even if nt right. Well Done RSReplyDelete
how wonderful when the heart wins....ReplyDelete
positive joyful words...so nice!ReplyDelete
very beautiful pair of haikus...especially the second one... :)ReplyDelete
Impressive how you are able to melt all the words into a winning thought.ReplyDelete
Please have a good new week.
A nice win for the heart! Clever work!ReplyDelete
I love the second haiku the best! That old heart vs. mind battle- so common- at least for me. Yes- the heart triumphs!!! Nicely done~~~ReplyDelete
yes, there are moments that requires celebration to take that backseatReplyDelete
'Nothing fishy here please..'ReplyDelete
your words dance magic..
hope to see you at our potluck tonight.
Nice one Ramesh. Winning in short I must say....ReplyDelete
Lovely to have you back with us at LoL!! Thank you.ReplyDelete
Always a pleasure to read your humor.
Do join us again this Saturday!!
Fantastic work Sir...ReplyDelete
I loved the haikus a lot.. :)