My Post # 398
Written for HAIKU HEIGHTS PROMPT: OBSESSION
Missed Hugging Moon
Saw it on the edge
Of terrace, I ran like mad
Yet couldn’t catch it
It had just risen
Above, serene and so quiet
Shining in glory
Once again I had
Missed hugging Moon, my friend
Or my obsession?
RS : )
Also shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
I know how you feel Ramesh, this often happens to me, I rush for the camera and just as I get the focus right a cloud or something obscures my vision, still you can always imagine :~)ReplyDelete
Great words for that guardian orb in the sky.ReplyDelete
good one :)ReplyDelete
really liked the theme ..
hugging the moon...very nice image.ReplyDelete
your obsession i believe.
Don't run on ur terrace, RS :( It's very risky.. Moon might not like it either!ReplyDelete
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Friend. Definitely friend.ReplyDelete
By now we know and believe your obsession with the Moon RS!! ..and not to forget the other irresistible urge, good writing and the Eleph and the Ant!! :)ReplyDelete
inventive, love the missed hugging the Moon part.
Loved it!! For some reason, first I read it moon as mom...that means...'missed hugging MOM'....however later I realised the story was about mom's brother...chanda mama, ur friend!! :)))ReplyDelete
~Keep the Spark ALive..
you have a long time love affair going with the moon. we are all aware of this tryst!ReplyDelete
i was surprised more with Magical Mystical Teacher's fickle romance for Autumn, right on the heels of a languid romance with Summer!
Hugging the moon is a never ending yearning.Excellent observation. The desire signifies man's wants kept alive at each cycle.
One hug for the moonReplyDelete
and a great big hug for you
Both, so far away
Ramesh - I LOVE LOVE this ... hugging the moon - delectable!! :-)ReplyDelete
I would like to hug the moon too. Let me know if you make it. Nice one.ReplyDelete
Obsession to reach the sky :)ReplyDelete
Ah, the veiled moon, so near yet so far away. You have described your obsession beautifully.ReplyDelete