Monday, May 5, 2014

A Distant Home... Haiku..

Written for Haiku Horizons

Prompt: Ring




 Her young round lips 
throw out white rings of smoke;
a distant home 
**
A distant home;
Mom sells her rings to give 
her fairy wings
RS:)
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11 comments:

  1. LocomenteMay 5, 2014 at 5:06 AM

    A very different one...
    But "her" presence is still there!

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  2. AnonymousMay 5, 2014 at 5:37 AM

    The second one is very poignant! My mom had to sell her jewelry to get me through school!

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  3. Sumana RoyMay 5, 2014 at 8:05 AM

    and look what she is doing...o my...so sad..

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  4. AnonymousMay 5, 2014 at 10:51 AM

    Loved this - a totally different take on the prompt. :)

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  5. UnknownMay 5, 2014 at 11:20 PM

    Very emotional and touching !!

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  6. rabbi neil fleischmannMay 6, 2014 at 5:04 PM

    I really like each of these. They're like little stories.

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  7. Sanjana May 7, 2014 at 5:34 AM

    Hi Rameshji!! How u doing? Hope you remember me from Leo's Haiku Heights.. It's been really long I read your exquisite work so thought of dropping by.. And I must add, I am not at all disappointed.. simply loved the second one..so touching!! Reegards.

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  8. UnknownMay 7, 2014 at 6:16 AM

    Love the second one best. Awesome haiku!

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  9. Amrit SinhaMay 10, 2014 at 5:09 AM

    This is beautiful ... your haiku have great stories in them :-)

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 10, 2014 at 11:05 AM

    Oh, those smoke rings! How sad!

    Fertility’s Shadow Ring

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  11. AnonymousMay 14, 2014 at 2:05 PM

    I like 'em both!

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