Friday, May 2, 2014

Fight at Mango Shop..Haiku



Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart


Ah, sweetness carries
some very bitter taste;
fight at mango shop


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Fight at mango shop;
her sweet thoughts become his balm 
for frayed feelings,


RS:)


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8 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiMay 2, 2014 at 11:03 AM

    Bitterness at mango shop , its unbelievable.
    Lovely haiku.

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  2. LauraMay 2, 2014 at 12:09 PM

    Frayed feelings arise so suddenly, it is good to have sweet words and mangos for soothing.

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 2, 2014 at 12:18 PM

    I'm glad there's some sweetness to be found among the bitterness!

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  4. carol l mckennaMay 2, 2014 at 1:14 PM

    Ah ~ tis life written well in your haiku ~

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. J CMay 2, 2014 at 2:18 PM

    Oh gosh, take it outside. Don't smash the mangos! ;)

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  6. Cynthia of Cynful CreationsMay 2, 2014 at 5:57 PM

    We could all use such a balm for frayed feelings!

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  7. rebeccaMay 2, 2014 at 7:07 PM

    you are so clever!
    fight at mango shop;
    trouble in paradise!!!

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  8. AnonymousMay 3, 2014 at 7:50 AM

    Ah life!

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