Friday, May 2, 2014

Fight at Mango Shop..Haiku



Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart


Ah, sweetness carries
some very bitter taste;
fight at mango shop


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Fight at mango shop;
her sweet thoughts become his balm 
for frayed feelings,


RS:)


8 comments:

  1. Bitterness at mango shop , its unbelievable.
    Lovely haiku.

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  2. Frayed feelings arise so suddenly, it is good to have sweet words and mangos for soothing.

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  3. I'm glad there's some sweetness to be found among the bitterness!

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  4. Ah ~ tis life written well in your haiku ~

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Oh gosh, take it outside. Don't smash the mangos! ;)

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  6. We could all use such a balm for frayed feelings!

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  7. you are so clever!
    fight at mango shop;
    trouble in paradise!!!

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