Friday, May 16, 2014

She Hides Her Wings..Haiku



Rebecca's Haiku My Heart




 Closed window,
soft light,softer music;
she hides her wings

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 She hides her wings;
light fades, music stops,
window opens

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 Window opens;
she spreads her wings and
just flies away 

RS:)
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 16, 2014 at 12:38 PM

    Nice image...I am in the midst of butterfly myth these days so really appreciate this one.

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  2. AnonymousMay 16, 2014 at 12:49 PM

    May her flight be long and her journey wonderful! You created such a vivid picture!

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  3. carol l mckennaMay 16, 2014 at 1:09 PM

    Very ethereal and delightful cascading haiku ~ Happy Weekend ~

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. gmaMay 16, 2014 at 5:28 PM

    Love this one!!!

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  5. HazelMay 16, 2014 at 8:05 PM

    love it when she spreads her wings and flies away. freedom!

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  6. rebeccaMay 16, 2014 at 8:15 PM

    thank you for transporting me beyond the music and soft light....
    beyond the open window. enjoy your weekend ramesh, thank you for brightening mine.

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  7. Judith WesterfieldMay 17, 2014 at 12:21 PM

    So lovely. (Just wondering what has taken wing . . . ?)

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 18, 2014 at 1:18 PM

    The wings can't stay hidden forever, can they?

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  9. AnonymousMay 19, 2014 at 10:23 AM

    Ah, freedom!

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